LI:Write poetry about Matariki and make a dimantic poem.
This is my dimantic poem about Matariki.To make a dymantic poem you have to have...one noun,two adjectives,three verbs,four nouns,three verbs,two adjectives and then one noun that sums it up about Matariki. Here is my one.
Stars
sparkling bright
flying,bouncing,pushing
seven sisters,moari new year,myth
shining,fighting,aurguing
eye catching,coulorful
MATARIKI
flying,bouncing,pushing
seven sisters,moari new year,myth
shining,fighting,aurguing
eye catching,coulorful
MATARIKI
Hi Kaitanu i love your blog i thought it was very interesting i loved maybe next time you can put some writing at the bottom but overall good job
ReplyDeleteHi Kaitanu,
ReplyDeleteI loved your Diamante poem about Matariki.
I found it very interesting and joyful, also liked how you remembered to include the LI.
Next time you could not put all Capital letters for your title unless you purposely did that for shouting.
Otherwise great post.
Kind Regards Sev.
HI Kaitanu Liam here.
ReplyDeleteI really like you post your poem was detailed there was know spelling mistakes and yea maybe next time you could make it a bit longer and to remember to add the LI and capital letters after full stops any way see yea
Hi Kaitanu
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post about Diamante poems.
I thought it was really good how you explained what we had to do for the diamante poems.
buy next time you could maybe not do all capital letters for matariki because unless you were trying to shout.
I also liked how you added the LI,
From Poppy
Hi Kaitunu
ReplyDeleteI Really like how you added how to write a dynamite poem, I also liked how you added maori in. I would not change anything in this its really good. good job for not writing most thing in your poem from the board.
Hi Kaitanu
ReplyDeleteLike your blog I like how made it look like a diamond shape I can't think of anything you need to work on.
Kind regards
Gio
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