Friday, 26 July 2019

MY HOLIDAY BLOGPOST (UPDATED)

3 comments:

  1. Hi Kaitanu,
    Great post! I loved how you added heaps
    of detail to it. It was great. There was
    lots of passion in your writing, it
    sounded like you had so much fun. Your
    holiday must have been really special.
    Maybe next time you could proofread
    your writing.

    Great post!

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  2. Hi Kaitanu
    Amazing post! I like how you added lots of detail and lots of pictures. Maybe next time you could make it a bit shorter because it is like a novel.

    Kind regards Tarli jay Wilson

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  3. Hi Kaitanu
    Great blog post you had a lot more fun that me in the holidays and it was nice of the nibore to give dakota a horse, did she call the horse blue because the horse was blue. Great punctuation I can definitely see that you didn't forget and I really like that you did a slide for your post.

    Have a great day.
    Phoenix.

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