Tuesday, 10 September 2019

Going To Jackson's

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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous24 September 2019 at 12:42

    that was an awesome post
    it sounds like you guys had a really fun day

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  2. Anonymous25 September 2019 at 12:09

    Hi Kaitan
    I really liked your post I thought it was really cool. With your detail it made me think I was basically there I also love how you told us what you did at what time and I really liked the photo,
    I didn't find anything wrong I thought it was fully spot on!

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  3. Anonymous25 September 2019 at 14:38

    Hey Kaitanu
    Great Post!
    Sounds like great fun!
    I like how you wrote what happend at each time.
    Remember to use an 'Li'
    Bye

    Ruby T

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  4. Anonymous18 October 2019 at 10:48

    hi kaitanu
    nice blog I like how you put the times in for what you did it sounds like that breakfast was good maybe next time you could put it in a font that is easier to read
    meelah

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  5. Anonymous21 October 2019 at 14:11

    Hi Kaitanu
    I love you blog post. I like how you said what time you did things. You had so much detail well done. Your breakfast sounds really good.

    Kind regards Tarli

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  6. Anonymous25 October 2019 at 12:41

    hi Kaitanu I like your blog and how you showed us what you did at what time it was.also I like how you told us everything that all good about your blog there's nothing bad about it too
    kind regards
    Anton
    bye

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  7. Anonymous25 October 2019 at 12:55

    Hi Kaitanu I love your blog post this week I like how you used Paragraphs also how you wrote the time and under that what you did.
    Maybe next time you could add a learning intention.
    From Amelia

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